Nonsense, that's lovely!
Don't believe you Nige. That's fabbo. Top composition and great inking/finishing.I wouldn't mind 'failing' like that on some of the scribbling I've been doing lately.
The results don't match what I had in my mind's eye, close but no cigar (I do get annoyed when stuff doesn't come out like I imagined!)...I'd give this six out of 10 :)
Amended version here:http://nigelowrey.blogspot.co.uk/2012/07/jungle-fever.html